Welcome to Room 10's blog! This is a place where we will be able to share our news with you, some of our published work, some of our daily writing, our reflections, and our photos. Please note....some work won't be edited - just our first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
A rmy is the best they trin really hard,
N ew Zealand tries the best and they get really far,
Z one of death is a place at war,
A nzac Day makes us think of them all,
C elebrate their lives in happy ways because they're in heaven.
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This poem is so good. I like how you said Zone of death is a place at war. You rock!
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