Welcome to Room 10's blog! This is a place where we will be able to share our news with you, some of our published work, some of our daily writing, our reflections, and our photos. Please note....some work won't be edited - just our first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi I really like your slide I think it is so cool but here's some it vice Olivia I think you accidental made a mistake on the blue poem you made a mistake when you said I look up the feeling of happiness but you said I look up the feeling og happiness that og was the mistake bye.
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Hi I really like your slide I think it is so cool but here's some it vice Olivia I think you accidental made a mistake on the blue poem you made a mistake when you said I look up the feeling of happiness but you said I look up the feeling og happiness that og was the mistake bye.
ReplyDeleteHi I really like you poems but I think that Ella could of added more poems to red.I really like Lexie's because you had lots to add for the poems.
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