Welcome to Room 10's blog! This is a place where we will be able to share our news with you, some of our published work, some of our daily writing, our reflections, and our photos. Please note....some work won't be edited - just our first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Great reviewing of your books, Aaliyah and Luca. They both look like good books to read. I like the transitions you have used between slides. Good job. Next time you could add even more to your summary so we know more about the story or you could include a google drawing of a scene or character.
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Great reviewing of your books, Aaliyah and Luca. They both look like good books to read. I like the transitions you have used between slides. Good job. Next time you could add even more to your summary so we know more about the story or you could include a google drawing of a scene or character.
ReplyDeletehi Aaliyah & Luca
ReplyDeletegreat book reviews I like your layout.
maybe you can put the settings in .
your transitions to each slide are great.
from katie
Great reviewing of your books.
ReplyDeleteThe slide show whats me to read the books.
Next time add more slides.
Well done.
hi my name is hayley I like how you put a lot of facts and imformation.
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