Welcome to Room 10's blog! This is a place where we will be able to share our news with you, some of our published work, some of our daily writing, our reflections, and our photos. Please note....some work won't be edited - just our first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Kia ora Katie, My name is Tania and I am a Manaiakalani Facilitator based in Whangarei. I have the lucky job of reading through the Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class and individual blogs and leaving comments. I like the way you have chosen to share your book review on your class blog. I know students are always looking for good books so it's good that they can be inspired by other readers. I am wondering how the book hooked you in from the start? Perhaps you could add to your slide and explain this a bit further. Have you decided to read the next book in the series? Thanks for sharing your reading. Nga mihi nui Tania
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well done Katie on that book! Maybe next time put more slides on if you want to and have you finished that book?
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Katie! Maybe you could add some more slides like Ella said. But other then that I think it has a lot of detail
ReplyDeletespectacular job katie next time add your opinion on the book other than that great job
ReplyDeleteKia ora Katie,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Tania and I am a Manaiakalani Facilitator based in Whangarei. I have the lucky job of reading through the Tuhi Mai Tuhi Atu class and individual blogs and leaving comments. I like the way you have chosen to share your book review on your class blog. I know students are always looking for good books so it's good that they can be inspired by other readers. I am wondering how the book hooked you in from the start? Perhaps you could add to your slide and explain this a bit further. Have you decided to read the next book in the series? Thanks for sharing your reading.
Nga mihi nui
Tania
great job next time have more slides
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