A poem
by Stephanie
A poem as sweet as candy,
Candy as sweet as dreams,
Dreams as sweet as my dad,
When he sings,
He sings so soft so nice,
So nice as my neighbour,
When she puts up a fight,
So amazing when she gives,
Us treats are sweet there'
So many treats but my,
Teacher is sweeter than ,
All the candy canes,
In the world,
The world is big,
And big is bigger,
And that's the end
I like how you repeated some words .
ReplyDeleteI like how you rhymed your poem
ReplyDeleteI love how you put your dad in the poem how did you come up with so many great ideas for sweet its awesome.
ReplyDeleteI love your ideas and I like how u said Candy as sweet as dreams nice job
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