Stunning Stars
I saw a stunning star shoot through the sparkling sky.
She stares as a star shot by.
A sleepy shimmer slightly shines in her eyes.
Her sparkly smile shines as the sun passes by as the new sparkly sun shines
A new shinny day combines.
By~Brooke
I like how you said A sleepy shimmer slightly shines in her eyes.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said A sleepy shimmer slightly shines in her eyes.
ReplyDeleteI like how you said" She stares as a star shot by" because it says what she did.
ReplyDeleteyour alliterations are very cool you should do some more poems but different letters and make it a little longer over all it was a stunning star poem
ReplyDeleteI like how you said her sparkly shiny smile as the sun parsses by.
ReplyDeleteGreat poem Brooke!! I like your rhyming. Next time try to add more vocab.
ReplyDelete- Sam
Great poem brooke mathie and great vocab stunning work
ReplyDeleteGood work Brooke.
ReplyDeletegood vocabulary