The Invasion
by Isaac
I turn the corner and there it was, a jumbo alien. The alien had a human's head but when you look closely, you realise that it doesn't. He had sharp claws sticking out of his hands, getting ready to fight.
His tummy was a five pack and it had abs so that meant it's very strong. The aliens feet were as hairy as bigfoot's. Its toes were as small as a beetle. Its scars are from fighting humans because they killed its mum and dad.
The alien's body is as round as a ball and it is not friendly. If it sees you it will try to eat you so dont go near it. This alien has very pointy hair like a porcupine and as sharp as a shark's tooth.
I felt scared when I saw it. I ran for my life but … it caught me. I screamed for help but no one heard me.
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